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The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle

Fiction | Novel | Middle Grade | Published in 1990

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Part 1, Chapters 8-12Chapter Summaries & Analyses

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Part 1, Chapter 8 Summary

During the next week, Charlotte gets her sea legs: “I grew so firm in my footing that I hardly noticed the pitch and roll of the ship, nor minded the ever-present damp” (66). The weather remains fair; the captain tells her the ship’s making good progress.

Her clothes soon become hopelessly soiled. She washes what she can with a bucket of seawater hauled up for her by the men. Each night and morning, she brushes her unruly hair for 20 minutes. Each day before breakfast, she searches herself for fleas.

Meals are served in the crew’s mess hall. The food is meager: Breakfast is coffee and hard bread with molasses; dinner includes boiled meat, rice, beans, and more coffee, with the occasional dessert of boiled flour with raisins. Charlotte has little to do, other than keep her journal, and she gets bored. At night, though, she stands on deck and gazes at the sky: “So many, many stars!” (67) The highlight of each day is tea with the captain, where she tells the captain of things she’s seen and heard.

Charlotte tries to remain aloof from the crew, but Zachariah encourages her to socialize and her natural friendliness draws her to them. She tells herself she’s simply performing her duty as the captain’s informant, but soon she’s peppering the crew with questions and listening to their strange stories about South Sea castaways and ghosts in the rigging. She becomes something of a “ship’s boy,” running errands for them. She even climbs partway up the rigging. She never ventures into the hold, however, and the crew quarters are off limits.

Zachariah is the oldest crew member; as the only Black person on the ship, he’s the butt of unkind humor. Still, he is highly regarded, and Charlotte’s friendship with him raises her standing in the eyes of the crew. Zachariah makes for her a set of crew trousers and blouse, so that she can be dressed properly for her “scampering about.” Realizing that she’s been venturing beyond her proper station as a young lady, Charlotte doesn’t want to wear them.

She writes in her journal an essay on the proper conduct of young ladies. She reads this to Jaggery, who praises her, and she realizes that her father, so similar to the captain, would approve as well.

Every day, Jaggery paces the quarterdeck, watching everything on board. He insists on strict maintenance—scrubbing, scraping, caulking, tarring, painting—and has an eye out for loose sails and slovenly work. He insists that every man on watch keep busy. Charlotte is very impressed.

Second mate Keetch seems fearful and servile toward the captain; first mate Hollybrass obeys silently and watchfully. Now and then, the captain will slap or strike a crewman; Charlotte averts her eyes. She reports dutifully to him grumblings among the sailors, but the ongoing resentment toward the captain troubles her.

For several days, no wind rises, and the ship is becalmed. The air is hot and heavy. Jaggery orders even more work for the men; their anger grows. At tea, Charlotte gently suggests that the men are overtired; the captain laughs and offers her a biscuit, saying, “They shall wake up when we run into a storm” (75).

Part 1, Chapter 9 Summary

A crewman, Ewing, exhausted from a hot day tarring the rigging, sews a patch on a jacket but breaks a needle. Charlotte offers to find a new one. He tells her where to locate it among his things in the crew cabin. Charlotte runs for Zachariah, hoping he’ll fetch it for her from the forbidden area, but he’s unavailable. She decides to retrieve the needle herself.

She approaches the door and hears men discussing some action in the near future for which seven men have signed on. They mention Charlotte: “Her being here isn’t anyone’s fault. We tried. You remind yourself—we kept those other passengers off” (78). She knocks; they answer impatiently; she explains about the needle, and they let her search for it. Inside, it is dark, crowded, and dirty. The men point her to Ewing’s trunk; she opens it and sees a pistol within. She finds a cork stuck with needles and pulls one out. As she leaves, she stumbles against a trunk in the middle of the room and knocks over a piece of paper. Picking it up to replace it, she sees on it two concentric circles with signatures in between.

Alarmed and nervous, she leaves quickly, bumps against Keetch, and accidentally stabs her hand with the needle. She brings it to Ewing; he notices her stress and asks if she is ill. She denies it and flees to her cabin. There, she thinks about what she has seen. Clearly, a rebellion is coming. She knows the four men who are off watch; one, Ewing, is on deck, and Fisk answered the door; the other two are Morgan and Foley. But three men lay in the hammocks, for a total of five.

Charlotte remembers, back at the Liverpool dock, seeing someone climb a rope and sneak aboard the Seahawk. She realizes that the strange face she saw near her trunk must be the fifth man, a stowaway who set up the carved face to scare her away from his hiding place.

She decides to report this to Jaggery. She climbs up to the quarterdeck, where she finds Morgan, who looks at her and draws a finger across his neck. She turns away, terrified; when she turns back, Morgan is gone. She glances forward at the forecastle. Foley is there, splicing a rope. He stares at her, then looks away.

She returns to her cabin. Realizing that Jaggery is her only hope, she sneaks over to his cabin and knocks. He lets her in. Hollybrass is there. She asks a word in private; Jaggery permits the first mate to stay. She blurts out what she’s seen, including the pistol and the paper with circles, known as a round robin. Jaggery orders Hollybrass to assemble the men: “I intend to crush this mutiny before it starts” (87). 

Part 1, Chapter 10 Summary

Arming himself and Hollybrass with guns from the ship’s safe, Jaggery grabs Charlotte, and they hurry forward to the forecastle deck. Jaggery clangs the bell for assembly. At first, nothing happens. Then the sailors emerge, angry and threatening, some armed. One man, “muscular and stocky, with a red kerchief tied around his neck and a sword in his hand” (90), has only one arm. It is Cranick, the man crippled by Jaggery the previous year. He is revealed the be the stowaway Charlotte saw climb aboard.

Jaggery sneers at Cranick and prepares to shoot him. Cranick pulls out a paper: “we’ve got a round robin here, which declares you unfit to be captain of the Seahawk” (90-91). Jaggery fires his weapon; the ball strikes Cranick square in the chest. He falls back, blood gushing. Jaggery threatens to shoot anyone who helps Cranick. He orders the crew to drop their weapons; Hollybrass quickly collects them, along with the round robin. Charlotte looks on, stunned. Zachariah moves toward Cranick, hands raised; the captain prepares to squeeze his trigger but relents. Zachariah feels for a pulse; finding none, he declares the rebellious stowaway dead.

The captain orders Zachariah to toss Cranick’s body overboard. Zachariah protests that he should say a few words over the body; Jaggery refuses and orders Hollybrass to dump the body. Jaggery commands Zachariah to open a gate in the side of the ship; Zachariah refuses. He orders Charlotte to do so; she tells him “I … can’t …” (94). Angry, Zachariah does it himself. Hollybrass drags Cranick’s bloody body up to the gate and pushes it through; the body falls away and splashes into the sea.

The captain says that nothing of this event will be recorded in the logbooks, as Cranick wasn’t a member of the crew. One man will take the punishment for the rest, and the voyage will then continue normally. He asks Charlotte to pick the sailor to be punished; she can’t. Jaggery studies at the men and chooses Zachariah.

Part 1, Chapter 11 Summary

The men shrink away from Zachariah. He stands alone on the deck. Jaggery offers him last words. He expresses no regrets, forgives Charlotte, whom he knows was simply used by Jaggery, and declares that the captain is the worst he has ever served under.

Jaggery orders a hesitant Hollybrass to tie Zachariah’s wrists to a rope in the rigging. Zachariah’s hands stretch high, his toes barely touching the deck. Jaggery brings out a whip. Charlotte tries to leave, but Jaggery orders her to stay as a witness. He hands the whip to Hollybrass and orders him to deliver 50 lashes to Zachariah. The first mate blanches but begins without enthusiasm.

Charlotte, in tears, begs Jaggery to halt the punishment. Jaggery scolds her and insists that order must be preserved. She says she’s sorry she told him about the mutiny because Zachariah doesn’t deserve this, but Jaggery silences her with more scolding. Charlotte rushes at Hollybrass, knocks him down, and grabs the whip. She tries to toss it overboard, but Jaggery grabs her. She slips away; he corners her. He reaches for her; she raises an arm to protect herself, and the whip snaps up, cutting Jaggery’s face.

Stunned, the captain snatches the whip from Charlotte and whips Zachariah with all his might. He throws down the whip and stomps away.

Charlotte leans over the railing and throws up. The men cut Zachariah down and, leaving Charlotte alone on the deck, carry him to the forecastle.

Part 1, Chapter 12 Summary

For most of an hour, Charlotte lies in her cabin and sobs. She blames herself for what happened but can’t escape the truth of the cruelties committed by the captain. She betrayed the crew, who had taken her in, and cut Jaggery’s face. Charlotte decides to apologize to the captain. She knocks on his door; reluctantly, he opens it. She begins her apology, but he interrupts her, and, turning, reveals the welted gash on his face. Angrily, he tells her he will no longer protect her from the crew. He tells her never to visit him again and chases her away.

Charlotte returns to her cabin. Stunned, she stands there, searching for some solution. She still wants desperately the captain’s forgiveness. She also wants the crew to forgive her. She walks up on deck, looks forward, and sees the crew conducting a funeral for Zachariah. His body is wrapped in a hammock. A few of the men pick up the body and heave it overboard, saying “amen.” They say a final prayer, and, turning, notice Charlotte. They stare at her.

Charlotte stammers, “I … I am sorry” (107). Fisk tells her to go to her friend the captain. Charlotte, sobbing, says he’s not her friend, and that she wants to help the crew instead. They simply stare. She returns to her cabin feeling responsible for everything that happened.

An hour later, the ship’s bell rings for all hands. She sneaks out and watches as Jaggery announces that Mr. Fisk is the new cook, Keetch is demoted to common sailor, and Mr. Johnson, who didn’t sign the round robin, is promoted to second mate. He demands a full complement of men at each watch, no matter what it takes. Mr. Morgan protests that extra watch duty is legal only during an emergency; Jaggery replies that the recent events make for an emergency.

Glumly, the men resume their duties. Charlotte goes to the galley, where Fisk is working. She asks if she can help; Fisk sneers and tells her to go be with her friend, the captain. He tells her she’s the one who betrayed Zachariah’s faith in her, and that, if she can’t cook or steer or manage sails, she should simply wait for landfall, where she can resume her privileged life and forget all about them.

Ashamed, Charlotte retreats to her cabin. Sleeping fitfully, she forms an idea. She removes her clothing and puts on the sailor clothes Zachariah gave her. At dawn, barefoot, she steals over to the galley, where Fisk is working. She has come to be one of the crew.

Part 1, Chapters 8-12 Analysis

Chapters 8 through 12 follow Charlotte about the ship as she befriends the sailors and discusses them daily with Captain Jaggery. She stumbles onto a conspiracy, reports it to the captain, and learns the hard way about misplaced loyalties and cruelty at sea.

Charlotte takes an interest in the ship, its sails and rigging, its decks, and how things work onboard. Her energetic curiosity likely would earn a sharp rebuke from her father—he might accuse her of being a “tomboy,” a girl with boyish behavior—but, by herself on the voyage, she feels free to explore and learn as she sees fit.

Though she enjoys the crew’s company and likes Zachariah especially, Charlotte’s allegiance remains with the captain, and when she stumbles on the conspiracy, she reports it to him immediately. Until now a sheltered, pampered girl, Charlotte believes naively that she is doing the right thing; she has no idea what she’s gotten herself into. Even for an adult, her situation would be a difficult one: She blames herself for the vicious cruelty and death visited on the men as a result of her actions, but had she sided with the crew she would have been a mutineer, which is a crime.  

She makes an impulsive decision that changes her life. Her attempt to stop the whipping of Zachariah inadvertently causes an injury to the captain—who, in a rage, rejects her pleas for forgiveness, to the point of abandoning his promise to protect her. Jaggery’s strength is his confidence, but his flaws are his anger and an unwavering sense of superiority. These weaknesses cause him to push Charlotte away, driving her to the crew’s side.

The incident forever alters Charlotte’s view of the world and her place in it, transforming her from upper-class girl who is at a remove from the crew to their defender and colleague. Charlotte tells Fisk, “I’ve come […] to be one of the crew” because has realized which side she wants to be on, both literally and ethically (114). Fisk, whose name reflects his often-clenched fists, must now decide whether to open those hands in welcome to a girl who betrayed the men, and foiled their rebellion, leading to the death of two of them.

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