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46 pages 1 hour read

Andrew Lane

Death Cloud

Fiction | Novel | YA | Published in 2010

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Chapters 13-17Chapter Summaries & Analyses

Chapter 13 Summary

Sherlock leads his pursuers through the streets of Rotherhithe and into the underground tunnels beneath the Thames. He narrowly escapes a tunnel fire and a plague of fleeing rats before finding his way to the surface on the other side of the river. Having shaken his pursuers, Sherlock resolves to go back and find Crowe and Matty. He crosses a bridge and reenters Rotherhithe in time to see a ship being loaded with the beehive crates. He realizes that “he had inadvertently stumbled across Baron Maupertuis’s operation. This was why Denny and his gang had been here!” (239).

Virginia also arrives on the scene at that moment. She is disguised as a boy because she wanted to track her father and friends. The two teens loiter around the dock, and Sherlock learns from the wharf master that the ship is being loaded for a short trip to France. Unfortunately, they have attracted the notice of the ship’s crew, who encircle Sherlock and Virginia and capture them: “A hand holding a cloth clamped itself over his face. The cloth smelt medicinal, bitter and heavy. He nearly choked. And then suddenly he found himself falling into a bottomless pit [...] and dreamed of terrible things” (245).

Chapter 14 Summary

When Sherlock awakens, he finds himself in the identical room he occupied at the baron’s estate. However, a look out the window confirms he is in a building near the seashore. He realizes that the baron has made the crossing to France with his cargo, and the two teens were drugged during the entire trip. His mansion here is identical to the manor in Farnham: “Baron Maupertuis was a creature of habit and liked to have his surroundings as familiar as possible, wherever he was” (249). Once again, the black-clad attendants come to take Sherlock to the baron. This time, they are accompanied by an enormous man named Mr. Surd. He is the Baron’s “whip master,” who says, “Whatever he wants done, I do. If he wants a glass of Madeira, it’s my job to pour it. If he wants your head on a plate, it’s my job to cut it off and deliver it” (251).

As before, Sherlock is escorted into a massive, darkened chamber where Virginia is already seated. Rather than maintaining his silence, Sherlock tells Maupertuis everything he knows. In the process, he reaches a startling conclusion about the baron’s endgame. The two previous victims were stung because of clothing from the factory that was soaked in a contaminant. Sherlock deduces, “So there’s something about the clothes that causes the bees to attack them. In their boxes or crates they’re safe, but when people wear them […] the bees are attracted to them, and sting whoever’s wearing them” (255).

The baron confirms this theory. He has a government contract to supply military uniforms to British soldiers at the army bases of Ripon, Colchester, and Aldershot. If those men ship out overseas, they will carry the danger with them. Sherlock says, “And then you release the bees, and they attack every single private, subaltern, and officer in the British Army” (256). The baron also confirms this fact. He explains that Britain has grown too ambitious and wants to rule the world. The baron justifies his actions: “The boundaries of the British Empire have to be pushed back, if only so that other countries can get some breathing space, some room to live” (257). Maupertuis represents a multi-national group called the Paradol Chamber that is eager to curb British power overseas. The baron tells Surd that it is time to release the bees from the fort, saying, “By the time they find their way to the mainland and across the country, the uniforms will have been distributed. And then confusion will reign!” (261).

Chapter 15 Summary

To buy time to think of a way out, Sherlock challenges the baron’s plan and says that it won’t work. He so enrages Maupertuis that the latter decides to kill Sherlock personally instead of letting Surd do it. Before anyone can act, Virginia rushes to the curtains and tears them down, letting light flood into the room. The illumination reveals that the baron is suspended from what looks like huge puppet strings that are controlled by a pulley track suspended from the ceiling. His minions act as puppeteers. The teens are horrified by the spectacle before them: “He was a puppet: a human puppet, entirely operated by others. ‘Grotesque, yes?’ the Baron hissed. His mouth and his eyes appeared to be the only parts of his body that he could move by himself” (269).

Maupertuis explains that he was the French liaison to the British Army during the Crimean War and was present at the Charge of the Light Brigade. He saw the folly of men who unquestioningly followed orders on a suicide mission, calling in “a tedious, pointless engagement based on misunderstood orders in a war that should never have been fought” (269). The baron was trampled in the onslaught and vowed afterward to have his revenge on the British Empire. With the assistance of his puppeteers, Maupertuis rises, a sword in his hand, and prepares to kill Sherlock. At the same time, Surd attacks Virginia. Both teens fend off their assailants. In a tense battle, Sherlock ultimately finds a way to entangle the baron’s various cables and cuts several of them, rendering Maupertuis helpless. Meanwhile, Virginia manages to knock Surd out by hitting him over the head with an iron helmet from a suit of armor. In the ensuing confusion, the two teens flee.

Chapter 16 Summary

Running to the stables, Sherlock and Virginia steal two horses and ride to Cherbourg, the nearest coastal town. Uncertain about what to do next or who to contact, they stumble across a vessel called Mrs. Eglantine. Waiting by its gangplank, they find Crowe and Matty. Giving a quick summation of the problem, Sherlock asks what to do next. Crowe advises contacting Mycroft, while Sherlock says someone must find the French fort where the bees will be deployed and stop the operation. Crowe and Virginia agree to travel back to England to get Mycroft to stop the distribution of uniforms and send a naval vessel to the fort. Meanwhile, Matty and Sherlock pinpoint the fort‘s location and travel there to disable the bees if they can. The boys take a rowboat to the fort and sneak into the enclosure, splitting up to assess the situation:

What made Sherlock’s breath quicken was the beehives, lined up in a regular pattern across the flagstones. There were hundreds of them. With tens of thousands of bees in each hive, that meant something like a million aggressive bees were located just a few feet away from him (291).

Sherlock observes someone in a beekeeper’s suit feeding pollen to the bees. He remembers learning that flour is highly flammable and concludes that pollen powder might also ignite easily. As he considers his next move, he is surprised by the sudden appearance of Mr. Surd and his whip.

Chapter 17 Summary

Sherlock fights with Surd, eventually getting control of his whip and pushing the big man into a beehive. The angry bees sting him to death. Matty arrives at this juncture, and Sherlock explains that they need to ignite the pollen, which will burn all the beehives. Next, “he threw the lantern. It arced away into the cloud of pollen and vanished. Moments later he heard the shattering of glass as it hit the flagstones. Followed by a massive whump! as the pollen caught fire” (301). Once the pollen ignites, it causes a massive explosion, but the boys manage to flee just as the entire fort catches fire.

Sherlock and Matty row their boat across the English Channel and rendezvous with Crowe on the other side. After a good night’s sleep and a substantial breakfast, they discuss their adventure: “Sherlock gazed out at the constant, timeless sea, wondering what would happen next in his life. He felt as if he had been diverted onto a road that he hadn’t known existed. What would he find at the end of it?” (306). At that moment, Sherlock notices a carriage passing down the road. Inside is Baron Maupertuis. The teen realizes that the baron and the Paradol Chamber are still up to mischief. His adventures have only begun.

Chapters 13-17 Analysis

The final segment revisits the theme of False Perceptions. Once Sherlock eludes his pursuers in the tunnels under the Thames, he emerges and crosses a bridge back to Rotherhithe. There, he finds yet another person in disguise. Knowing the danger of the area, Virginia dresses herself as a boy and comes in search of her allies. The two locate the ship being loaded with the baron’s bee cargo, and Sherlock once again pretends to be someone he isn’t. Adopting the air of a common day laborer, he learns some useful information from the wharf master about the baron’s destination. Sadly, he is still an amateur at the art of blending in since Sherlock and Virginia are both spotted by Maupertuis’s henchmen and dragged aboard the ship.

False Perceptions abound once Sherlock awakens from his drugged sleep and finds himself in a room identical to the baron’s mansion in Farnham. Only the external surroundings have changed. The baron has constructed a duplicate shell for himself in France. This sleight of hand gives only a small hint of the false perception that the baron is really projecting. When Virginia literally rips down the curtains and metaphorically destroys the baron’s false front, both teens can see what the man really is—a grotesque puppet. The revelation of his broken physical state is enough to trigger a confession from the baron, in which he explains his real motivation for the bee attacks:

You want to believe that your Empire is built on rock-solid foundations, but you are wrong. The foundations are rotten, and the edifice will crumble if it is pushed hard enough. You want to believe that tomorrow will be the same as yesterday, but it will not. The world will change, and the balance of power will tip in favour of my associates (264-65).

Once Sherlock exposes the baron’s disguise, all the false perceptions that have plagued him throughout the story fall away. He now knows what the target is and why. The rest of the novel switches back to the theme of Becoming Holmes because Sherlock demonstrates conclusively the traits that will later make him a successful detective. He has learned how to use his brain as a weapon. During his duel with the baron, Sherlock realizes that his fencing abilities are no match for the puppet man:

If Sherlock couldn’t beat Maupertuis with his skill as a swordsman, he would beat him with the power of his brain. All he had to do was work out a single vulnerability, something he could exploit. And it had to be something to do with the way Maupertuis was moving, or being moved. That was his weakness (276-77).

The boy quickly concludes that he must find a way to entangle the cables that allow the baron to move. He succeeds by jamming a broken chair between the strings and then cutting several of them, rendering Maupertuis helpless. Later, he will use his brain just as effectively to figure out a way to destroy the beehives without dying in the process. Recalling an obscure fact about the flammability of flour, Sherlock envisions a quick way to dispatch the bees:

As he was remembering Farnham and the station, another memory clamoured for Sherlock’s attention: something that Matty had told him. Something about powder. About bakeries. He ransacked the lumber room of his memory, trying to bring the words to mind (294).

The reference to the lumber room of his memory echoes another valuable piece of advice from Crowe: “Stock the lumber room of your mind with as many facts as you can fit in there. Don’t attempt to distinguish between important facts and trivial facts: they’re all potentially important” (53).

A random comment about a fire in a flour mill is all Sherlock requires to put an end to the deadly peril of the killer bees. Once again, Sherlock’s brain proves to matter more than brawn. He demonstrates this fact yet again in his final confrontation with Surd: “‘What are you doing, boy?’ Surd asked. ‘You think there’s anything there that will save you? You’re wrong. Wrong.’ ‘The only thing that will save me is my brain,’ Sherlock said” (297). Ultimately, this is all he will need as an amateur sleuth just starting out in life or as the master detective he will eventually become.

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